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70 Times 7

Unto what shall I liken my struggled walk in life Unto a breath without air Gasping and grasping For that which I can clearly see And ever try to be But like unto the shining stars Of heaven’s glory above Lies as it would seem High above my reach Yet my hands are stretched heavenward Unto what shall I compare the hope which I have for change To the light of sun above the storm Breaking through betimes With the brilliance of gleam And a glimpse of the dream But even as the delicate flower Of the desert plain It withers and returns to the ground Hidden once again from view Yet my faith awaits the rains of spring And what likeness portrays my will to go on The waves of the wind driven sea Ever striving to come ashore Yet each time falling back For gravity they lack But like the shimmering beauty Of the freshly fallen snow Though it turns to grey and melts away Yet is destined to come again So also am I resolved to return in the season And never surrender Until seventy times seven

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Date: 12/15/2012 6:07:00 PM
I like the Biblical reference, there are a lot of underlying messages within this portayal of struggle. Well written poem.
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Date: 12/15/2012 6:44:00 AM
I saw this poem featured on the main page of PS. I really love your descriptions and the layout of your poem. Great job!
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Date: 12/14/2012 5:37:00 PM
Jeff,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great day inspired by "YOU!" wishing you the best holidays 2 come ;-) always ~PD
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