6 Words

His depression faded sadness was evaded.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2016 12:33:00 PM

Kind of hard to ignore depression or sadness..I hope that he got help..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara..Welcome to soup..

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/26/2016 9:10:00 PM

Excellent poem Elijah

Elijah Malcom
Date: 4/4/2016 1:19:00 PM

Thankyou sorry for the late reply just saw this :).

Winged Warrior

Date: 3/4/2016 8:04:00 AM

To bad it is easier said than done...great write Elijah...congrats and welcome aboard...tighten your seat belts it's going to be a great ride...god bless...^WW^

Elijah Malcom
Date: 3/4/2016 9:00:00 AM

Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 9:48:00 AM

Thanks for the reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/23/2016 5:20:00 PM

Elijah, Congrats on your "SIX WORD win." LINDA

Elijah Malcom
Date: 2/26/2016 7:10:00 AM

Thanks Linda!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2016 4:14:00 PM

Congrats in the contest, Elijah.

Elijah Malcom
Date: 2/26/2016 7:10:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/23/2016 12:05:00 PM

many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Elijah Malcom
Date: 2/23/2016 1:44:00 PM

THanks Jan!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/22/2016 2:34:00 PM

That's a relief! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Elijah Malcom
Date: 2/23/2016 6:56:00 AM

Thanks Jan!