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6 To 8 Sunlight In Your Eyes

The sun rose, rays travelled your sky unfallen on your tears corroding your eyes for years. The opacity blocked the beauty of the world, your nights never saw the bright days break until on an autumn dawn I rose in your horizon. The new sun in your eyes glowed in VIBGYOR, wiping tears I entered with gleam of nascent joy in your heart lighted by the sun soaked in love. October 25. 2017. For 6 to 8 Contest. Sponsor by : Nette Onclaud.

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Date: 10/31/2017 4:10:00 PM
subimal, this winning piece is so intimate, lovely.. congrats on your award and thanks for joining...
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/1/2017 1:07:00 AM
Thank you, nette for liking the poem and for placing it.
Date: 10/30/2017 4:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Subimal, for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/31/2017 12:36:00 AM
Thank you Eve, for appreciating.
Date: 10/30/2017 4:53:00 PM
Such a lovely poem about new love and how it turned darkness into bright sunshine, Subimal. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/31/2017 12:37:00 AM
Thank you Sandra for visiting and appreciating with nice words.
Date: 10/30/2017 3:11:00 PM
- A great poem with emotion, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your win ! - // S.S. :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/31/2017 12:38:00 AM
Thank you, SS for visiting and appreciating.

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