6 To 8 Sunlight In Your Eyes

The sun rose, rays travelled your sky unfallen
on your tears corroding your eyes for years.
The opacity blocked the beauty of the world,
your nights never saw the bright days break
until on an autumn dawn I rose in your horizon.
The new sun in your eyes glowed in VIBGYOR,
wiping tears I entered with gleam of nascent joy
in your heart lighted by the sun soaked in love.

October 25. 2017.
For 6 to 8 Contest.
Sponsor by : Nette Onclaud.
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Onclaud Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 4:10 PM
subimal, this winning piece is so intimate, lovely.. congrats on your award and thanks for joining...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 1:07 AM
Thank you, nette for liking the poem and for placing it.
Roper Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Congratulations, Subimal, for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:36 AM
Thank you Eve, for appreciating.
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 4:53 PM
Such a lovely poem about new love and how it turned darkness into bright sunshine, Subimal. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:37 AM
Thank you Sandra for visiting and appreciating with nice words.
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 3:11 PM
- A great poem with emotion, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your win ! - // S.S. :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:38 AM
Thank you, SS for visiting and appreciating.
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