6 To 8 - Rag Doll

His Raggedy Ann

He called her his Raggedy Ann for her long red locks and skinny frame,

and when he beat her, she'd collapse like a rag doll to the floor.

Using cruel tactics, he distanced her from family and her few friends.

She was but a concubine to gratify his desires, to cook and to clean.

Accustomed to abuse since childhood, she knew no other way,

but still she dreamed through her woes of a Raggedy Andy who could love her.

The day she fought back was when he punched her belly; she lost her baby.

No longer limp, she has become a skeleton buried in a woods far far away.


Oct. 25, 2017 for the ' 6 TO 8' Contest of nette onclaud
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Davey Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 5:00 PM
A very sad tragic tale beautifully exposed in this write, congratulations once again my friend
Onclaud Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 3:24 PM
you got me all riled up, andie... beautifully relayed that congrats are in order for a well-deserved award... thanks for showing other sides of you...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your with a fine poem.
Haight Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 4:57 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. So very sad, but these unbelievable events to happen, and your well-written poem reminds us that our world is not perfect or fair at times. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 4:55 PM
back to congratulate you for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Arowolo Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 3:47 PM
Wonderful write,Andrea.very touchy..Congrats on your well deserved win.
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 3:03 PM
- Congratulations, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 2:01 PM
Congratulations on your win. Very, very sad.
Michaels Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 5:45 AM
A powerful and quite disturbing write, Andrea. Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
May Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Chilling rag doll tale Andrea...
Horn Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 6:41 AM
If blonde hair was worn by Raggedy, Would this possible become a tragedy; Worn for while; Was her style; Trump thinks that he is our majesty.
Gondolf Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 6:56 PM
A sad story but often all too true. Good luck in the contest Andrea.
One Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 4:59 PM
An excellent take on the contest Andrea.. Good luck..
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 2:16 PM
- A sad story, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mhangwa Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 9:52 AM
This is quite sad but a wonderful write. All the best in the contest
One Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Excellent take on the contest Andrea..
Lamoureux Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 8:34 AM
There is no doubt that you are a poet. Exceptional writing Andrea.
Salehi Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 6:15 AM
My dear Andrea..... why?
Salehi Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Hi Again, The why question is toward human nature. How come some of us are SO cruel. You are right it happens too many times, in too many places.... The only thing we need is more love....
Dietrich Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 8:05 PM
because it happens more than people know. Someone has to tell their stories.
Sathasivam Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 2:29 AM
Excellent write although it is extremely sad. All the best for the contest. Thanks for sharing it.
Vaso Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 10:12 PM
This brings sadness to my eyes, such a well expressed poem though!
B. Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 7:44 PM
This is extremely sad! I had a lump in my throat reading this poem. This is an impactful write.
Ashley Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 7:31 PM
Such a sad poem about a very sad life Andrea. Your poem is poignanty expressed and your first two lines are shockingly and powerfully emotive. Well done. Good luck in the contest
Pandit Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 6:09 PM
Well written story of a sad life with a very sad ending, just as intended for the contest--best for a win!
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 6:02 PM
Great impact in my emotions , Andrea :'( Hugs Eve ~`*
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:50 PM
Boy this is a sad one Andrea! I am not aware of the contest. I will have to check it out but I am not up to writing a sad poem right now. You did great on your entry! : )
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