6 To 8 - Melody of Sadness

The raven’s cry bellows with twilight’s grip
Echoing the staggered  throb of a dirge;
Where grief’s murmurings become unheard
Down the walkway of crushed expectations.

A strained lullaby  becomes incoherent amidst wreaths
As a young mother quells a song for  her child,
Interred through  the icy pause of birds’ refrain, ebbing.


Nette Onclaud Contest: 6 TO 8
25 Oct 2017
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Onclaud Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 3:20 PM
congrats on your superb win with this deep poem so intensely crafted, rhoma... please accept my thanks for sharing this...
Roper Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 4:54 PM
Congratulations, Rhoma, Wow!! for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 3:01 PM
- A really sad poem, Rhoma - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // S.S. :)
Williams Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 6:17 AM
Good luck in the contest on this brilliant write...Maria
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