Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

6 To 8- Melody of Sadness

An aria of spiritual apathy is flowing in my reverie of woe.
I’ve endured  g r i e f  beyond the euphony of a metered tune and
                        am lost inside harmony’s lyrical chorus.
Ballads of verses contain my  o b s c u r e  existence, 
   and I am forever heartbroken from the noise of a detestable vocalist. 
Despondent and desolated, my ears bleed for chanting rhythm of love,
               but I am  s i n k i n g, drowning in a sea of wounded wretchedness. 
I embrace this MELODY OF SADNESS, forgotten...yet heard in misery’s refrain. 


6 to 8 Poetry Contest
Nette Onclaud
October 24, 2017

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Frances Schiavina November 1, 2017 at 8:44 AM Congratulations Laura. Your poem is awesome. A true master of poetry or in this case maestro.

Brian Davey October 31, 2017 at 4:52 PM This is outstanding poetry writing Laura, such dark overtones I hardly ever see in your previous writes but you nailed it perfectly, Congrats on your win

Nette Onclaud October 31, 2017 at 3:07 PM a remarkable melody teeming with dark tones, lou...fine congrats on your high win and thanks for being part of the contest...

Subimal Sinha-Roy October 31, 2017 at 12:48 AM Congratulations Laura on your fine win.

Eve Roper October 30, 2017 at 4:51 PM Congratulations, Laura, for a great write ! Hugs Eve ~`*

Sandra Haight October 30, 2017 at 4:35 PM Sadly beautiful, Laura. Congratulations on your nice podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2017 at 2:57 PM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2017 at 6:02 PM such imagery, Laura. You really took on this challenge to wow us. I am drawn to that topic too!! But maybe I will choose one of the others. All three are really nice. Beautiful Scars October 24, 2017 at 8:32 PM Thank you sweet Andrea, you are the best!

DM Babbit October 24, 2017 at 3:32 PM Sometimes, there really aren't any words except wow. Beautiful Scars October 24, 2017 at 8:32 PM Awww.thank you DM! Take care