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Corn Pulse Twirling Spinal wave Decoded rings square Progressive loss of a tin spark Ineffable tidal clap remains in partial sight Cycled dragon spoon enhances sensorial spore road Recreation of constant growth Inverted slices Immersing Sound cone Snails Thoughts

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Jay Loveless

Date: 10/16/2009 9:50:00 AM

you are trippy ^^ i love it xoxo raiin keetly

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/9/2009 4:18:00 PM

Great writing, Cesar! Love it. And thank's for your comment on "Passing Hours". Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2009 5:48:00 AM

Good morning Cesar, thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today. I am hoping you will enjoy your weekend as much as I am going to enjoy mine. Love, Carol

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/31/2009 8:13:00 PM

WoW!! Great writing, and I sense some emotional depth within your lines.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/31/2009 4:19:00 PM

hmmmmmmm if you added another 6....they'd swear you were a spawn of the devil LOL...please try to write me a verse om War for my contest? Thanks for reading me. Your comments on the blog would be appreciated too! Light & Love

Derrick Burton

Date: 7/31/2009 3:04:00 PM

:) that was deep, it says something but i do not want to give my two cents and offend anyone. Enjoyed and enjoy your night.

Robert Coles

Date: 7/31/2009 5:30:00 AM

This poem is excellent, my mind feels like it travels the line lengths, starting small then travelling outwards and eventually coming back in. What a trip!