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Watching myself from behind
Chasing words on the front
Dieing on the the rear
But my life is going along
Shots of death inside
Life escaped outside

I wonder where we would have 
been
If we chose our paths w/out a 
bend
Boring life the straightest road
Midnight holds the great 
unknown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 11, 2012 at 6:35 PM
my sentiments exactly. watching myself from behind is something i do a lot of, but i think everyone does in there own way. really enjoyed; simple words yet deep meaning.
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