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5w Poem

miesha was walking to the closet to straighten her shoes so her mommy wouldnt hurt her a 5w poem is who what when and where

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Miesha ....Lovey

Date: 5/6/2009 8:11:00 AM

YALL MY MAMA DONT HURT ME THIS POEM WAS INTENDED TO BE EXICTING AND THRLLING NOT HARMFUL ANY ANY WAY

Date: 4/30/2009 1:11:00 PM

So sad that children have to worry about being hurt by the ones that should love them. Simply stated but effective message. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/30/2009 7:44:00 AM

Good poem. I'd rather read ...so her mommy woudn't ground her...........instead of hurt her!! Reading my senryu poems can spice your poem(s). I wish you all the best.