5w Poem

miesha 
was walking to the closet
to straighten her shoes
so her mommy wouldnt hurt her

a 5w poem is who what when and where
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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....Lovey Avatar
May 6, 2009 at 8:11 AM
YALL MY MAMA DONT HURT ME THIS POEM WAS INTENDED TO BE EXICTING AND THRLLING NOT HARMFUL ANY ANY WAY
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April 30, 2009 at 1:11 PM
So sad that children have to worry about being hurt by the ones that should love them. Simply stated but effective message. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Shahwan Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 7:44 AM
Good poem. I'd rather read ...so her mommy woudn't ground her...........instead of hurt her!! Reading my senryu poems can spice your poem(s). I wish you all the best.
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