Makayla Gilchrist Poet Rhyme

5 Month Love

5 MONTH LOVE

Have you ever been in love? 
month 1 he was sent from above
He came to me so soft and pure
He made me feel alive and sure
When I think of him I think "blue"
So fresh,  so clean and so brand new

Nothing in this world touched him
God sent him to me my special blessing
Month 2 came a went so fast
But I knew our love will last

Month 3 would be a scare for me
They said u may not stay with me
I ignored their jealous chatter
Because to me it did not matter

Month 4 I laughed so hard I cried
To feel u moving deep inside
My heart so full of love it swelled
For safe and sound I knew u dwelled

Alas!  month 5 had swiftly came
I found myself alone again
Why? Me oh my oh dear just mayby
Anything something to save my baby
But he got called back to god above
At least I knew how to feel in love.

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Karen Edwards-Gregory October 10, 2016 at 7:27 PM This poem brought teats to my eyes, being a fairly new Mom this could not be easy. Congrats, on POTD.

Connie Marcum Wong September 15, 2016 at 2:35 PM Makayla, the way you have presented this outstanding piece adds to its poignancy. I am sorry for your loss. You still have a part of your infant saved forever in this moving poem. Congratulations on your deserving POTD! Blessings, Connie ; ) 7 Makayla Gilchrist September 16, 2016 at 5:00 AM Thank u so much

Keith Logan September 14, 2016 at 3:06 AM My wife's experience was bad enough at three months, five must have been devastating. You have my very best wishes for the future. Makayla Gilchrist September 14, 2016 at 3:51 PM Thank you and I'm sorry for your loss

Manmath Dalei September 13, 2016 at 5:51 AM Ur love is well depicted. Nice poem on a sad event. God may bless u..........//:) hugs//Manmath// Makayla Gilchrist September 13, 2016 at 6:26 AM Thank you

Cindi Rockwell September 12, 2016 at 5:08 PM Sad write. Congrats, though, on POTD! ~Cindi~ Makayla Gilchrist September 12, 2016 at 5:10 PM Thank u

John Fleming September 12, 2016 at 4:00 PM I enjoyed reading your charming little poem this long night, Makayla...Really quite lovely! My best regards. :) john Makayla Gilchrist September 12, 2016 at 4:02 PM Thank u john

Jan Allison September 12, 2016 at 3:41 PM beautiful but sad Makayla congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx Makayla Gilchrist September 12, 2016 at 3:43 PM Thanks jan :)

Chelcie Darling September 12, 2016 at 9:46 AM Very touching!! Great job! Big hugs! Makayla Gilchrist September 12, 2016 at 9:50 AM Thank u (hugg

Sara Chansarkar September 12, 2016 at 7:57 AM So sad, but beautifully expressed!Congrats Makayia Makayla Gilchrist September 12, 2016 at 9:50 AM Thank u soo much... Thanks for the encouragement

Daniel Turner September 12, 2016 at 7:24 AM Congratulations on POTD Makayla and welcome to poetry soup. Sad write! I will be looking forward to see more:) Makayla Gilchrist September 12, 2016 at 7:27 AM Thank you

Phil Capitano September 12, 2016 at 6:45 AM Very poignant Makayla and congrats on POTD; what a way to enter the soup. Namaste. Makayla Gilchrist September 12, 2016 at 7:15 AM Thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2016 at 2:47 AM - Makayla, welcome to Poetry Soup :) - Congratulations on your today's poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Makayla Gilchrist September 12, 2016 at 7:14 AM Thank you

Darlene De Beaulieu September 11, 2016 at 6:17 PM Makayle I got lost reading your poetry.Your poem made me feel that I was apart of it. I really did enjoyed reading your poem. Makayla Gilchrist September 11, 2016 at 8:54 PM Thank you so much