Jonathan White Poet Rhyme

4evr Minus 1

I vowd 2 luv 4ever
4evr & a day
i'll always keep my promise
n my 4evr luvn way.

we sealed r vows n concrete,
we set r hearts n stone
u carvd my name n silvr
i carvd ur name n gold

4evr ended quikly
u had no sense of time
cause wen u say "4evr"
its alot shortr thn mine

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Krispin Prejean July 4, 2009 at 4:22 PM Man u readin my mind bro... all of tys I feel now....

Michael Jordan January 24, 2009 at 6:02 AM Jonathan - Been there done that more than once in my life - I know it's hard bro - keep your spirits up - God Bless, MJ

Lisa Mook January 22, 2009 at 5:59 PM Wonderful...I loved it. Can definitly relate...Always Lisa

Jen H. January 22, 2009 at 4:17 PM Oh my gosh! You have a way with words. Over the past fall, I feel like I can relate to this a lot. Thanks for sharing! ~Jen~