45th- Blank

there are 2 blank cards
in the angel card deck so
today I'm "depressed"

for this to be the 
best country in the whole world
today it looks sad

just happy that I 
was a member of the age
of Aquarius

our best hour was 
revolution of 60's
created big change

now elephants rule
just capitalistic pigs
love hear themselves squeal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 7:05 AM
at least maybe the braying will be quiet for a while....LOL
Mehta Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 6:39 AM
Nice thoughts on the currect state of affairs, kristi
Guzzi Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 6:25 AM
enjoyed the sentiment, but a sad enjoyment, this would be more powerful and appropriate in free verse, forget forcing it into 5/7/5 (totally agree with you ;) Light & Love
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