44 For Us

‘Hey Familiar’ 
How about we make a family Yeah?
I made up these lines, To ,make your face shine
Do you want to go to my place I got wine?
For real I want to make you mine
I’m true, this is true, Me for you
Say Yes I do, I do,
So we become one from Two
Us, I and you, Your perfect boo
Lets give us five years already
This is so strong to have been from scratch
Let’s create a past without a patch
Let us Fall in love with some experience with us
Let’s create a happy past, head for our future
The past be love and how we grew
The future of us in our blood results
Our Juniors with the Names of our seniors
We name according to our People
We live according to our people
We never define divorce
Become the African strength, Unbreakable force
We keep the profits and never talk of the loss
We act not in anger, we pose
We know no difference of a tongue and a fang
We make lasting promises with no later excuses
No lamentation of misuses
That I am with other mistresses
Nor you of other masters
We avoid such disasters.

So Marry Me, Carry me in your heart
As one of your body parts
Handle me with a lifetime smile
Let us, I, U go the longest mile
Let’s store a permanent love file
Let’s write a future history
Let us be the Best story
Let us be
We
Us
I’m hers, to others
I’m yours to you
I’m us with us
Till death do us
These 44 for us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/9/2018 7:41:00 AM
What a smart way to name a 44 line poem that honors your own sweet relationship! Brilliant!
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Date: 9/10/2018 6:59:00 AM
Thank you so Much, I appreciate your keenness and Your Love for Poetry..You went ahead to count the lines and Understood my message I am so grateful.
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