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Poetic Form: Monoku
Inspired: 2023 December 20
Image: N/A

 

4,237 Children of Gaza Oct 06-Nov 07, 2023

falls gloomy night skies meet the clueless ~ ~ winters bright nights new stars greet tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 21, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Heartbreaking my friend.. and still they carnage continues as the world powers watch on...
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 4:38 PM
Yes, ugliness that filters in its aftermath, whether it'd be some 80 years or a month, that scenario never change, Silent One. Aloha, William
Pandit Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 5:26 AM
So sad--how innocent children were the victims of war. Powerful write, William.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 7:02 AM
Agree, Vijay. We'll see down the road from now when the surviving kids will become of age, --innocents now...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 1:18 PM
It’s been too long and October 7th will not be forgotten. Sigh…
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December 20, 2023 at 2:07 PM
Home here Hilo been days of high surf warnings, overcast skies, and ceaseless rains--I had the time to express, Kim. Aloha, William
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