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3 Words N My Life

Its v easy to tell that I am alright It might even be easy to talk casually with u... But your verdict has made me fascinated... I had called u 'magician'... No doubt your magician because it’s only u and your words That can make me go to either extremes.... U said ‘I love u'... I just flew in air like I had wings!! Those 3 words took me to cloud nine!! It was like I rejoiced seeing and feeling the high tides... I started building dreams like a child building hill out of sand... Dreams grew as high as the sky... Loved u like I had never loved anyone... Never had seen u... But could feel u in every drop of rain... Could see u in every person I saw... My heart was oriented always towards u And my ears always waited to listen to u... Thought you feel it too Because it was u who had told those 3 words "I love u" I had never thought our story would end like this Again it was your 3 words Which just said “let’s be best friends"... This made me fascinated..! I could not be furious on you Because you were idol of my life... Yet again I followed you and said "sure" For it was me, who believed in the changing dream to reality... Assumed my future is never without you beside me... Assumed the high tides would last forever... And hill built out of sand would stay forever But now I know you were the mirage When I approached, u vanished! Left me with thousand questions unanswered..! Again your 3 words had impact on me It broke my dreams and they all fell apart scattered Now I am least bothered to join them all But I do believe that one day you will again say the 3 words "I need u" And I am moving on with this belief... I am not broken down Nor your 3 words made me weaker... Because its u who had taught me what is life Because its u who had taught me to be stronger Because its u who had taught me what’s friendship And you no doubt r keeping up your promise to be my best friends... So now it’s my turn Hey magician!! I assure u, I’ll be your best friend forever!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/27/2016 4:09:00 PM
Prathiksha,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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