3 Line Dilemma

DILEMMA

You crave complete release from problems, loss and fear - would you succumb

To promise of sublime unfettered bliss - for heaven’s kiss 

Perchance your life might then be one of formless endless tedium
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Hello Geoffrey, this is something to ponder. Have a nice day my friend.
Lindley Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations on your win. EXCELLENT POETRY MY FRIEND..
Brewer Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Thank you very much, Robert
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Back with Congrats!! :) xomo!
Brewer Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Thanks again, Maureen.
Talbot Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 10:05 PM
A well worthy winner in my book. And yes perchance, quite likely! Mick
Brewer Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:48 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words of appreciation, Mick.
Roper Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:02 PM
Congratulations on your win :) great write, Geoffrey. Hugs Eve
Brewer Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:46 AM
Many thanks, Eve
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Congrats for your win, Geoffrey.
Brewer Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:44 AM
Thanks , Andrea.
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:04 PM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Geoffrey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Brewer Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:43 AM
A second thank you Sunshine
Sands Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations for your win Geoffrey! :)
Brewer Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Thanks , Heidi.
One Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Heaven's kiss would be a perfect cure... congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Brewer Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Mmmmmmmmm! Thanks, Silent One
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Perchance quite likely :) xomo
Brewer Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Aye! There’s the rub! Thanks, Maureen.
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 6:41 AM
- Great written, Geoffery ... I like the idea / thought :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Brewer Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Enjoy the problems
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