3 Line Dilemma

DILEMMA

You crave complete release from problems, loss and fear - would you succumb

To promise of sublime unfettered bliss - for heaven’s kiss 

Perchance your life might then be one of formless endless tedium

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/8/2018 1:49:00 PM
Hello Geoffrey, this is something to ponder. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/8/2018 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. EXCELLENT POETRY MY FRIEND..
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/17/2018 7:47:00 AM
Thank you very much, Robert
Date: 6/8/2018 7:02:00 AM
Back with Congrats!! :) xomo!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/14/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thanks again, Maureen.
Date: 6/7/2018 10:05:00 PM
A well worthy winner in my book. And yes perchance, quite likely! Mick
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/8/2018 12:48:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words of appreciation, Mick.
Date: 6/7/2018 9:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :) great write, Geoffrey. Hugs Eve
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/8/2018 12:46:00 AM
Many thanks, Eve
Date: 6/7/2018 7:16:00 PM
Congrats for your win, Geoffrey.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/8/2018 12:44:00 AM
Thanks , Andrea.
Date: 6/7/2018 1:04:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Geoffrey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/8/2018 12:43:00 AM
A second thank you Sunshine
Date: 6/7/2018 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Geoffrey! :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/7/2018 9:08:00 PM
Thanks , Heidi.
Date: 6/7/2018 12:24:00 PM
Heaven's kiss would be a perfect cure... congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/7/2018 9:08:00 PM
Mmmmmmmmm! Thanks, Silent One
Date: 6/7/2018 8:03:00 AM
Perchance quite likely :) xomo
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/7/2018 12:16:00 PM
Aye! There’s the rub! Thanks, Maureen.
Date: 6/7/2018 6:41:00 AM
- Great written, Geoffery ... I like the idea / thought :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 6/7/2018 12:14:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Enjoy the problems
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