3 Haiku

the orchids dazzle beauty stealing air and sun some unknown painter puffy springborn clouds float across eternity so high birds can't fly wildflowers in backyard all grow free and beautiful 'till the mower comes

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/6/2020 4:33:00 PM

delightful imagery LJ, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

L. J. Carber
Date: 6/7/2020 10:16:00 AM

Thanks Jan--and how have you been? Hope all is well in these scary times....

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/6/2020 11:38:00 AM

Creative imagery. Loved the 93 million miles reference :) Congratulations on your win L. J.

L. J. Carber
Date: 6/6/2020 12:58:00 PM

Thank Aditi--that one was published by Haiku Journal, issue #63.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2018 6:58:00 PM

LJ, stunning set of haiku... shine on!...huggs

L. J. Carber
Date: 8/19/2018 2:21:00 PM

Thanks Nette, I'm glad you liked them-- they came to me as a trio.