2nd Blog-Ish

I'll have to put off writing my bio because there's something I'd like to ask of you soupers...:)

You might have already seen the notice beneath a few of my recent poems, but I'll post the 
same content here: 

I'd really appreciate it if you could give me some really hard-core critical feedback on my 
writing. The people on this site are so nice and their comments always give me such 
encouragement, but I would love some critical comments as well. 

Hope this isn't me being too greedy ;)

Will count on you all!

-G
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Gi-Sa Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 4:09 PM
I enjoy your work and would only recommend to keep writing how you write despite what other people say.
A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Amazing
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Grace. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 8:04 PM
Congrats Grace on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..
K. Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 12:20 AM
Hi Grace :) I don't think you're greedy at all-- it's actually so cool of you to want to get more critical feedback for your poems-- & Andrea's right too! & ha I may not be as brave as you-- this reminded me of this site that I was a super-short time member of (years ago) & I checked on it again & it's still there-- I'll soupmail it to you but be warned-- they even give warning there of how mean they could be it's actually more of like a poetry workshop? & Chris, start sweeping, haha!--nikko
Dietrich Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 7:17 AM
I'll tell you why I don't do it here. The times I have done this kind of thing, the people got really hurt. Even though I tried to do it as nicely as possible. Even some poets who may ask for it, in the end, they feel disappointed when you point things out. That is why I think most people don't offer critiques. Did you know they have a forum here for you to go and be critiqued? Go check it out! I bet it would be perfect for you. In a rush, will try to read some poems of yours later. LUv, Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Grace, are you sure you can take it?? LOL
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