2 Year Coming Dad

two years have nearly passed oh cold to the grass
my head still feels dead my mind will heel my love will always flow 
oh, how I miss you so dad.

love always you son 

duncan  the nightwalker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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July 26, 2018 at 2:25 AM
I'm so sorry for your loss, Duncan - I take care of my elderly folks, (now 92), and I thought my dad was leaving a few weeks ago, but he has come back to us. Every extra day is a blessing. Wonderful tribute, my friend!
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November 10, 2018 at 6:58 AM
thank you so much my friend, so very hard to loose someone never wanted the day to come when he passed.
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July 24, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Very nice tribute to your dad, love it. I wrote one a while back called Lillian for my mom :)
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November 10, 2018 at 6:59 AM
hi Debbie, its the hardest thing i have ever had to do. was always hoping the day would never come.
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