2 Days Can Kill Me

It's the feeling of losing a limb
And the space between time
Till it returns again
For the missing of the chime
Thats usually in your heart
Like the escaping dove
Your missing part,
The one you love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Matheny Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 6:59 PM
I LOVE IT!!!! Its so sad and emotional. .
Moreno Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 7:39 PM
Nice poem and great use of imaegry...Raul
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December 21, 2008 at 6:24 PM
This one has me smiling. My nursing diagnosis is that the narrator lives. You may want to change loseing to losing in the first line. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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