2 Broken Halfs Dont Always Make a Heart

I am one of the most loyal chicks in the game 
who could of showed you all woman aren't the same 
you refrained from giving me a chance 
my beauty within and not use to enchant
My  reserves caused you to become unnerved
You never wanted to wait so I gave in to heartbreak 
I wanted a mate and deep within your eyes 
I thought you did too .. ..........Oh my god !
 what you men put the good women through !!
 I gave in to your temptations only to become 
another past scab that treated you soo bad  
You already were  infected from a no good dame 
who claimed fame by savagely slaying  whatever soul 
you had in there caged now im actually understanding
of her jabs due to our recent exchange if only I filled 
your needs that are ours we both could of healed 
but now your too hardened to notice a real ladies appeal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Posey Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 3:59 PM
Will not accept blanket judgment of men. There are good and bad in all men and women. It seems that too often they are mismatched from the start... Great poem....You will like some of the stuff I write and hate some.... I'll visit often.... Jake
Jacks Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 11:54 AM
Yes I agree most mens hearts are hardened by hardships, but not all men. AS I notice a real ladies appeal. Enchanting poem!
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