29th of August

I love thee
Thou day of my birth,
Thy sunrise was gentle on my mother’s womb;
Thy sunset rested on the crest of her heart with ease

I love thy stars
They sang as the heavens were opened
To release another legend into the earth,
Oh! Thy sun smiled at me as I cried when I arrived

I love thy tender drops
-The tender tears of the skies…sour but sincere
The skies wept because the heavens gave up a star
But mother earth was glad to receive a precious pilgrim

I love thee oh 29th of August 
-The date of the dignified like MJ of Gary Indiana
And that of the saintly stars like Adeleke of Nigeria
I’m proud of thee thou date that danced with my destiny
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ryerson Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 1:25 PM
I THINK this is my favorite one of yours so far...but I ain't done yet!! Gotta' read 'um all and weep!! I think you must read the Bible alot?? I love that thy/thee style of yours... You got SOUL...honored to read your kind comments too!! Blessings... Tim
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 12:01 PM
You have SoupMail
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 12:00 PM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR ADELEKE HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU And I wish you 100 more birthdays. Love, Carol your poetry mom
Hayton Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 11:13 AM
What a lovely way to commemorate your birth and thank your Mum, she brought a truely wonderful person into the world.. Thankyou for your kind comments on my work, love Jo xxx
Meyer Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 10:38 AM
OH ... it's the 29th ... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
Meyer Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 10:37 AM
Yours aren't so bad either. What a wonderful tribute to your mother and the heavens and to your birth day. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment on my "Summer." ~J~
Winter Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 2:03 PM
Happy birthday on the 29th beautiful poetess. love, shar xoxo
Golden Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 10:35 PM
We will all celebrate with you in just a few days, Adeleke! Wonderful piece, here! Donna
Wood Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 1:37 PM
Happy Birthday again. Beautiful poem by a beautiful poet. Hope your day is everything your poem believes it to be. Thanks
Goff Avatar
August 23, 2009 at 8:37 PM
poetic birthday! Ade, nice work! jim
Culverhouse Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 5:26 PM
Nice write, keep up the good work.
Mason Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 10:06 AM
Well, you have to wait for the birthday song until next Saturday ... be sure to check the blogs ... actually your name will be with another member of PoetrySoup who has her birthday on the 27th ... smile ...
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