25

sadness engulfs me
at the loss of my father
~      ~      ~
dawn follows the night

mkt
2020

deathsadsenryu

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Andrea Dietrich

October 11, 2021 at 3:33 PM

Sorry for your loss. I like this one. Is 25 meant as a numbering of your haiku?

Michael Thompson

October 15, 2021 at 1:25 PM

Yes ma'am. I just do not have them all on here. Thank you Andrea.

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 11, 2021 at 6:21 AM

Hello Michael Thomas, I am sorry for the loss of your father. He is with you in spirit. Guiding you along the way. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 11, 2021 at 3:26 PM

Hello Michael Thomas, Michael when a love one passes it is not the best of years. She is with you in spirit. watching over you. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Michael Thompson

October 11, 2021 at 6:55 AM

Thank you Darlene. I lost my mother 9 months later. It hasn't been the best of years.