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Hi Soupers, I was thinking about how fast the days go by ( it's almost a new year)and I the phrase 24 hrs popped in my head. From that phrase I was inspired to write a poem with the same title:-) Alexis

24 Hours

Last night I had a long and restless night,     
I  couldn't sleep, I tried with all my might.

I couldn't get the “ phrase 24 hrs out of my head,
so next thing you know I stumbled out of my bed.

And I began to think about my life and all that I had done,
I thought about my many failures and victories I had won.

But I thought about having only 24 hrs left,
would I be selfish and only think about self

Yes, I have to make my wrongs right,
strive to love and not give up the fight.

I will try my best to be the version of me
and forgive others and let bygones flee.

I have no time to hold a grudge
or sit around and misjudge.

I just want to live my very best life
and let go of misery and strife.

Spend valuable time with my precious babies,
forget about the should have beens and maybes.

Our time on earth goes by extremely fast,
so with my 24 hrs I will strive to have a blast.






Alexis Y.
10-26-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Godwin Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 4:54 PM
I AM AWED. THERE'S IS NO DOUBT, NONE, TO ME THAT YOUR POP WAS SPIRITUALLY DELIVERED. I'm willing to bet this masterpiece flowed to your pen with very little revision needed; I believe this poem was meant to be and the universe delivered it through beloved child, Alexis. I'm faving it. You were 'promoted' to write this, yes? How Awesome He Can Be ... CayCay
Y. Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Wow! Cay Cay, I am humbled by your wonderful comment. I appreciate you and your kindness:-) Alexis
Trifiatis Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 6:45 AM
Inspiring and full of sense poem dearest, Alexis! Loved it!
Worthy Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 2:52 AM
Awesome poem. The world definitely could benefit trying to see from this perceptive.:) loved this one
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Lovely verse Alexis, life has many ups and downs and we have to make the best of the time we have, it goes so quickly. Tom.
Raven Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 1:11 AM
Hi Alexis, this is such a wonderful and real poem. You express yourself so well within the lines. This beautiful work sings to me and makes me think, "What would I do if I only had 24hrs.?" You play the heartstrings with an excellent piece of poetry Alexis. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Sands Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 6:52 PM
I really enjoyed this quality poem and how you express the quality of time. Very special Alexis :)
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 5:23 PM
Beautiful sentiments you communicated in this poem...a heartfelt depiction..well written, Alexis.
Green Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 4:57 PM
What a beautiful and uplifting poem. Your heart shines throughout this entire piece my friend. You are one of a kind Alexis. Really nice.
Y. Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 5:10 PM
Hi Chris, Thank you for being the first to comment and thanks for being so kind to on my poetic journey. I appreciate your support my friend. PS, Have a fantastic weekend:-) Alexis
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