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My nephew turned 21 today. I wrote him this poem. 
 

Twenty-one means you can have your first drink. Not soda, milk, orange, a Roy Rogers, nor shake. Yes, a beer, wine, whisky, martini, vodka. Just think - Remember good strong coffee will put on the brakes.

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Date: 5/30/2023 7:35:00 AM
Kim, I like this rhymed poem with observations of youth. Good last line. And yes, as a senior I need my coffee, more than any other beverage. Carol Louise
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2023 7:53:00 AM
Still doesn’t keep me awake…lol. Thanks, Carol!
Date: 5/29/2023 6:51:00 AM
Something to look forward to for the younger souls. Well said, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 7:31:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay :) I always enjoy when you visit my page!
Date: 5/29/2023 1:37:00 AM
So long as you are not driving. Also you could get addicted.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 5:22:00 AM
It is best to remind the young adults to drink moderately, to be the best of society! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/28/2023 9:06:00 PM
Don't laugh at me too hard now: Memorial Day and all, I figured '21' mean '21 gun salute!' Boy was I surprised! Cheers and Bottoms up!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/29/2023 5:21:00 AM
LOL…

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