20 Candles

I've wondered about this day, how naked this earth would feel
missing all the beauty that your life came to reveal..
i've wondered about this day; and our days apart just seem to grow
what your mother must have felt, 20 years ago...
I've wondered about this day, and how I denied it'd ever come
How many people here are missing you..so much it makes me numb
today is your birthday, there should be 20 candles on a cake..
I've wondered about this day; your absence is keeping me awake..
I've wondered about this day, do we celebrate or mourn?
this day is like a rose. and every rose has it's thorn..
I've wondered about this day, a day that's just for you
Today is your birthday, and today I honor you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Welcome to the honored halls of poetry, you exhibit the genius and the wit. I am indeed honored to call you friend
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 3:44 AM
Wow Elena, sad and well expressed.
Horsman Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 10:29 PM
Beautifully written elena, such sincerity. Harry
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