2000 Miles Away

2,000 Miles Away

Sooner than expected, my dear mother died at the age of 70 in 1998;                 and I, the distant one, was 2000 miles away.
My oldest sister died after an auto accident at the age of 55 in 1999;                    and I? 2000 miles away.
In 2003, an older brother died before I could arrive;
he was 56, and I was 2000 miles away. A younger sister died suddenly,                  also in 2003; she was only 46: and I? Again, 2000 miles away.
Another younger sister died in the Fall of 2012; she was 56,                                   and I was 2000 miles away.
My oldest brother was 79 when he died in 2013:
And I was 2000 miles away.

Never distant in my mind, but far away for a long time
All of my family lives in the Midwest and South;                                                  and I reside way out West, 2000 miles away.
Many years before, I had chosen to move and                                                        ‘go west young man’, 2000 miles away.

I learned sadly, that when illness or tragedy strikes
a loved one, it’s not good to be 2000 miles away.
For 38 years, I have been the distant one in my family.                                               I have endured the pain of separation and often wanted                                               to make a change from being 2000 miles away.

In the last days and hours of their lives, I was never there                                      to walk with them, to talk, to kiss, to hold, or to touch;                                              nor even to say, “Goodbye”.
No. I could only board a plane, and cry, simply because                                           I was far away, over 2000 miles.
02082012 PS Contest, Far Away, Nayda Negron, P5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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