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1YoS So many things that I'm unsure about I've lived a life uncut Could not erupt Till I was cured of doubt A sentry watching a century pass I've learned a lot It's been a long way from the halls of elementary class I've been a loner And I've been a stoner I've studied Plato's Republic Read both epics from Homer & loved it I've never been shot Hopefully I never am My only goal's to improve You can't find yourself a better man When it's all said & done I'ma give you 100 percent Raising the bar Cuz like you I'm just a regular person I keep it real You can judge me Or call it rude But life wears down to dust 100 years of solitude Will change your outlook Make you question yourself Go out Look for the truth Don't rest till you've exhausted the proof That's the path for me Whether you think I'm right or wrong Or consider my poetry blasphemy Would you deny my existence Like the loch ness? Would you damn me for my past Cuz my record isn't spotless? Had my fair share of grief That prepared me for despair More pain Followed by shock & disbelief Children being blown to bits Watched a nation choose guns over kids Almost no hesitation Exclamation Point was made The matter put to rest & laid Sent teachers back to school to explain it to the 1st grade? Racial issues in America are getting the best of us You want a free country But not for the rest of us That kind of frame of mind I gotta say's average Our own government barely recognizes gay marriage So how do I teach kids Not to be prejudice? When all they gotta do's log onto Facebook The evidence is written on the wall of your friend's page They say its their opinion That's good enough to defend hate? Try paying attention to the tension I'm done praying Men shun & it goes unmentioned I'm just saying Leaders with all of your veteran swag How about you try restoring faith back in the American flag? Until then I'ma definitely do my part To bring change Speaking only what's in my heart Don't make this a black vs white thing Make it a wack vs right thing Outsmart 'em That's how I'll honor Trayvon Martin

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Date: 11/10/2013 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations!!! Lawrence --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <
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Date: 10/15/2013 8:52:00 PM
enjoyed Lawrence, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/15/2013 8:24:00 AM
Lawrence, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/15/2013 8:12:00 AM
woooww, this was amazing, i truly loved it, it had everything in it.. i love the way yhou expressed your emotions.. thank you for sharing!! best wishes.. nikta
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Date: 10/15/2013 5:53:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Lawrencel! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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