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1 Cherry Blossom Haiku

Sakura breathing...
along an old stone footpath
children are laughing

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Timothy Hicks

May 27, 2013 at 10:05 AM

sakura breathing... what a great opening line! Both "zen" and "happening" all at the same time, with the children's laughter. I don't typically favorite haiku, but this was one was exceptionally good... well done!

Michael Dom

May 29, 2013 at 1:40 AM

Honored Tim. Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

May 11, 2013 at 9:35 PM

Hi Michael, stopping by to wish you a nice Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"

Michael Dom

May 12, 2013 at 12:22 AM

Hey Linda, thanks for your wishes. I wish a good Mothers Day to you and yours too. God Bless you. :-)

Kash Poet

April 25, 2013 at 8:32 PM

Good one Michael!Congrats on the win.Thanks for visiting my poem pages.

Poet Destroyer A

April 22, 2013 at 6:52 PM

Michael, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA

Michael Dom

April 22, 2013 at 9:18 PM

:-)