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1 Cherry blossom haiku

Sakura breathing... along an old stone footpath children are laughing

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Date: 5/27/2013 10:05:00 AM
sakura breathing... what a great opening line! Both "zen" and "happening" all at the same time, with the children's laughter. I don't typically favorite haiku, but this was one was exceptionally good... well done!
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Michael Dom
Date: 5/29/2013 1:40:00 AM
Honored Tim. Thank you.
Date: 5/11/2013 9:35:00 PM
Hi Michael, stopping by to wish you a nice Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"
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Michael Dom
Date: 5/12/2013 12:22:00 AM
Hey Linda, thanks for your wishes. I wish a good Mothers Day to you and yours too. God Bless you. :-)
Date: 4/25/2013 8:32:00 PM
Good one Michael!Congrats on the win.Thanks for visiting my poem pages.
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Date: 4/22/2013 6:52:00 PM
Michael, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/22/2013 9:18:00 PM
:-)
Date: 4/22/2013 1:12:00 AM
Well done, Micheal. I knew you would score high marks with this one! David
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/22/2013 9:18:00 PM
:-)
Date: 4/21/2013 6:19:00 PM
Lovely!..I would love to walk down this path...
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/22/2013 9:18:00 PM
:-)
Date: 4/21/2013 8:18:00 AM
Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Michael! I really love your great haiku! Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/21/2013 9:21:00 AM
Hi Lenora, I am glad you like this haiku. I'll certainly b visiting your island to read some of your works. Thank you for visiting mine. Cheers!
Date: 4/21/2013 1:46:00 AM
Many congratulations Michael xx
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/21/2013 11:45:00 PM
Thanks Mandy.
Date: 4/20/2013 11:25:00 PM
this is a great haiku I am seeing here. BIG congrats to you!!
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/20/2013 11:27:00 PM
thanks Andrea.
Date: 4/20/2013 11:25:00 PM
Fave!
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/20/2013 11:26:00 PM
You honor me - sweet as!
Date: 4/20/2013 7:20:00 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/20/2013 10:58:00 PM
Hooray! Ta, Debbie.
Date: 4/18/2013 1:46:00 AM
I can almost hear the stones echo the laughter of the children when nature exhales her colorful sighs. Very nicely done! David
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/20/2013 10:59:00 PM
Thanks David.