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1 Cherry Blossom Haiku

Sakura breathing...
along an old stone footpath
children are laughing

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/27/2013 10:05:00 AM

sakura breathing... what a great opening line! Both "zen" and "happening" all at the same time, with the children's laughter. I don't typically favorite haiku, but this was one was exceptionally good... well done!

Michael Dom
Date: 5/29/2013 1:40:00 AM

Honored Tim. Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2013 9:35:00 PM

Hi Michael, stopping by to wish you a nice Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"

Michael Dom
Date: 5/12/2013 12:22:00 AM

Hey Linda, thanks for your wishes. I wish a good Mothers Day to you and yours too. God Bless you. :-)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/25/2013 8:32:00 PM

Good one Michael!Congrats on the win.Thanks for visiting my poem pages.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 6:52:00 PM

Michael, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA

Michael Dom
Date: 4/22/2013 9:18:00 PM

:-)