19 Years

The less I am now.
The more riches I have now.
Is this what mom meant?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 8, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Thought provoking. I like the way you leave the reader with something to ponder. Thank you for sharing your senryu with us. Karen
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November 2, 2009 at 5:10 PM
nicely penned,
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November 2, 2009 at 2:41 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry this beautiful sunny day James. May you have a beautiful week filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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November 1, 2009 at 9:12 PM
Nice poem...Enjoyed...Marty
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