1968 My first funeral

I wonder why everybody felt the need,
to express their opinions so openly,
about this man who had the misfortune to die.

I watched them slowly strolling past the casket,
like they were shopping for fruit at the market,
I wondered why some of them felt the need to cry..

There were a few folks braver than the rest,
who touched his hand or patted him on the chest,
whispering that now he is in a better place.

Doesn’t he look nice and so peaceful.” they all said,
one lady even kissed him on his forehead, 
he looks so natural with that smile on his face.

When it came my turn to look over the side,
my excitement faded and to my surprise,
because to me the old codger just looked dead.

When your stretched out in your casket I suppose.
that’s probably the way that it always goes,
too look like you’re sound asleep at home in your bed.
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Wolf Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 9:19 PM
Second-to-last verse is unadulterated truth. All the rest -- other folks' cockamamy conceptions.
Mckeithan Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 1:07 AM
Good one. Amazing how everyone has a different view of the deceased but yours is the most spot on.
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