180

I live in this world of terror
Waiting for my final error
But then i saw something bright
And it made me lose my sight
Your beauty blinded me
As soon as i could see again i fell to one knee
i asked a question and you said yes
My life did a 180 and you cleaned the mess 
Since you the world is great
Im no longer full of hate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gumbo Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 5:54 PM
oh this is awesome! I really enjoy your writing Zach. Very well done!
Devonshire Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 4:01 PM
Love can bring joy to our lives and eliminate the "hate." Surely, it's a 180 degree shift if ever we are lucky enough to find true love. Zack, you can become a premium member by going to the home page. There are instructions there. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I look forward to seeing more of your poems. Love, Carolyn
Washington Avatar
May 23, 2009 at 3:54 PM
awww so cute ur boo is very luckie hehe=]]TinkBabyy
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace