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I live in this world of terror Waiting for my final error But then i saw something bright And it made me lose my sight Your beauty blinded me As soon as i could see again i fell to one knee i asked a question and you said yes My life did a 180 and you cleaned the mess Since you the world is great Im no longer full of hate

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Date: 5/23/2009 5:54:00 PM
oh this is awesome! I really enjoy your writing Zach. Very well done!
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:01:00 PM
Love can bring joy to our lives and eliminate the "hate." Surely, it's a 180 degree shift if ever we are lucky enough to find true love. Zack, you can become a premium member by going to the home page. There are instructions there. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I look forward to seeing more of your poems. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/23/2009 3:54:00 PM
awww so cute ur boo is very luckie hehe=]]TinkBabyy
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