Debjani Mitra Poet Rhyme

17 Is the Lucky Number

exultant sighs lamenting  in ripple
sentiments empath my school diary.
weeping willow tears, in weakness triple
both supine and idyllic memory.
I stare in aura at my ten wish list 
incidental, some unchecked, some in mist.
in veneration of fate, I exist. 




13th July 2019
Sponsor	Lu Loo
Contest	17 is the Lucky Number - Rhyme
Theme #3 Saturated in Sentiments
howmanysyllable count 10 in each line
The following words have been used
1.) Ten 2) Incidental 3.) Empath 4.) Aura 5.) Weeping Willow
 6.) Weakness 7.) Veneration 8.) Lamenting 9.) Supine 10.) Idyllic

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Subimal Sinha-Roy August 6, 2019 at 2:08 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Jeanne Mcgee August 5, 2019 at 8:57 AM Sweet and simple. Congrats on your win.

Beautiful Scars August 4, 2019 at 2:56 PM oh no, I just realized I meant to place you at 2nd. I apologize and will try to fix this. thank you for your participation and congratulations on your win. :)-luloo

Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2019 at 11:02 PM You are very philosophical. I enjoyed this piece.