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17 Is the Lucky Number

"Seventeen is the Lucky N Love is veneration without constraint. Incidental canvas mixing the paint. Empath Aura, Lamenting Aurora. Idyllic strength in Weakness blown restraint. Seven wings lifted in your salvation. Under pillow weeping willow- supine. Ten Carnal winds, gusts through oblation-mine. 07/09/2019 Jude Fernando Herrick ( MrFernando )

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Date: 11/2/2020 8:15:00 AM
Great first post Jude...
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Jude Herrick
Date: 11/6/2020 5:18:00 AM
It was a very creative challenge that I appreciated by the wisdom of the Moderator. She provided a great constraint within a vast amount of possibility, amongst beautiful premise and premises. Hat tipped to both You and Her'
Date: 8/12/2019 8:52:00 AM
What a great way to introduce yourself to Poetry Soup. A belated welcome. I hope you enjoy your time here.
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Date: 7/21/2019 1:01:00 PM
Love the way you have penned it. Keep writing
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Jude Herrick
Date: 8/2/2019 9:03:00 PM
Thank you very much Shiraz. I have enjoyed your poetry as well.
Date: 7/21/2019 9:44:00 AM
Nicely penned Jude. You know the value of word-symbols, and how to created new images from their association with each other. I very much enjoyed.
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Jude Herrick
Date: 8/2/2019 9:07:00 PM
Thank you Eric. I see you are no stranger to that yourself. I like reading your poetry.

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