Jude Herrick Poet Rhyme

17 Is the Lucky Number

"Seventeen is the Lucky N

Love is veneration without constraint.
Incidental canvas mixing the paint.
Empath Aura, Lamenting Aurora.
Idyllic strength in Weakness blown restraint.
Seven wings lifted in your salvation.
Under pillow weeping willow-  supine.
Ten Carnal winds, gusts through oblation-mine.

07/09/2019
Jude Fernando Herrick
( MrFernando )

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Silent One November 2, 2020 at 8:15 AM Great first post Jude... Jude Herrick November 6, 2020 at 5:18 AM It was a very creative challenge that I appreciated by the wisdom of the Moderator. She provided a great constraint within a vast amount of possibility, amongst beautiful premise and premises. Hat tipped to both You and Her'

Richard Lamoureux August 12, 2019 at 8:52 AM What a great way to introduce yourself to Poetry Soup. A belated welcome. I hope you enjoy your time here.

Shiraz Iqbal July 21, 2019 at 1:01 PM Love the way you have penned it. Keep writing Jude Herrick August 2, 2019 at 9:03 PM Thank you very much Shiraz. I have enjoyed your poetry as well.

Eric Ashford July 21, 2019 at 9:44 AM Nicely penned Jude. You know the value of word-symbols, and how to created new images from their association with each other. I very much enjoyed. Jude Herrick August 2, 2019 at 9:07 PM Thank you Eric. I see you are no stranger to that yourself. I like reading your poetry.