1-7-10 Kissing the Pain

Will you forever be the wind, that carries my rain?
i miss you, softly calling my name
i wish sometimes that you could be mine again
brushing my skin through our dreams
softly kissing my lips, fading my screams
eyes to bore into eyes
i saw you and knew my heart to be alive
i felt you each time we spoke
my heart, my love, seemed to grow
place a stake within my soul
let it bleeds as the thorns grow
ripping fervently into my flesh
as im bleeding softly to death
forever ill remember you, as my wind
forever ill be in my heart, your rain
softly kissing goodbye your pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 18, 2010 at 8:40 AM
wow rain this is a wonderfully beautiful poem! this is going into my favs now! i loved it, it reminded me of Paul and me. i mean wow the metaphors the imagery the raw feeling i felt wow almost speachless here!this was perfect and i cant even think of a favorite part because i loved the whole thing!=)Jo
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January 8, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Rain. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
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January 7, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Wow i will definitely write with you, just let me know when.
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