1-7-10 Kiss Away My Pain

I stood crying in the rain, no one could truly see my pain,
i thought perhaps, he had forgotten all our laughs,
all the things we wrote and said and swore,
left my love in a box at the door,
but then the clouds cleared away,
pushing away the cold cold rain
and i felt the wind, kiss away my pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sings Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 11:12 AM
Very Nicely written poem here.
Orozco Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 9:06 AM
Beautiful piece! I really enjoyed it- edward
Stevens Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 12:01 PM
Very nice Rain i've been there. on Chat I wasn't able to get my email address to ya in time. It's [email protected] ,have a great day.
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