15 Days

In the first day I have found the light,
I was so blind for it was that bright.
I never knew why.

In the second day I saw the constellations,
I was counting endlessly, but I missed some sections.
I never knew why.

In the third day I landed on Venus, the planet,
It was a strange feeling pulling me like a magnet.
I never knew why.

In the fourth day I engaged Mercury in existence,
My face was filled with drops of rain, I felt so tense.
I never knew why.

In the fifth day I was trapped into a black pitch,
Some lighten insects, me, the way they were trying to teach.
I never knew why.

In the sixth day I woke up in a bed, covered by a blanket,
I was dressed with a white shirt, and then him I met.
I never knew why.

In the seventh day I went to the seventh cell,
I was horrified and my heart was pounding as in Hell.
I never knew why.

In the eighth day I closed my eyes and I was dreaming,
I saw the Earth belonger and we were kissing.
I never knew why.

In the ninth day I clapped my hands and I yelled,
I had a smile upon my face and joy I gained.
I never knew why.

In the tenth day I was surprised by the nature-green,
Flowers smelling and my eye caught all I’ve seen.
I never knew why.

In the eleventh day I took a motorcycle,
I went with speed on the road but in circle.
I never knew why.

A dozen days had passed and I felt so lonely,
And he came at me and he embraced me, so lovely.
I never knew why.

In the thirteenth day a witch had cursed me,
I wanted again the rain and thunders to see.
I never knew why.

In the fourteenth day I craved more and more for blue,
I opened my eyes and close by me I found you.
I never knew why.

In the last day of my existence I thought:
Am I the only one which is here brought? ...
I never knew why…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/7/2011 8:41:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. have fun on P.S. with luv..
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:09:00 AM
thank you very much
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:05:00 AM
Very intense write on life... very good, enjoyed
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Date: 5/14/2011 4:10:00 AM
Thank you so much
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