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1440 - Her First Flight


first flight
overwhelming
floating above the clouds
airborne in the seventh heaven
enthralled

flyingheavenskycinquain

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Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2026 at 10:25 PM

You captured the thrill for someone doing this for a first time. Can you imagine a cave man even seeing it? Haha. Big congrats on your win

Victor Buhagiar

January 23, 2026 at 2:00 AM

I used to travel a lot on aeroplanes. But in 2001, I retired and stopped travelling. Still wish I could, though.

CayCay Godwin

January 21, 2026 at 1:59 AM

Enjoyed. Does this refer to your first flight, I wonder, can't help it.

Joanna Daniel

January 21, 2026 at 5:10 AM

Yes, it does. Thank you:)

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2026 at 8:56 PM

Very nicely done

Paula Goldsmith

January 20, 2026 at 11:31 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "1440 - Her First Flight" write with a fun picture. Somethings in life we will always remember. I was 7 when my parents put me on a plane to go see my aunt/uncle. What a fun adventure it was. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away................