1439 - Tides

Moon’s tug on the sea,
Rhythm of the breathing earth,
Shores seen and swallowed.

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Sam Kauffman

January 17, 2026 at 8:57 PM

Aloha William! Congratulations on your win! Only someone who has lived by, and loved, the ocean could express its beauty so wonderfully! Blessings hoa’aloha!

William Kelii Kekaula

January 18, 2026 at 11:12 AM

Mahalo for your kind thoughts. Aloha pumehana.

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2026 at 10:54 AM

Very lovely. Congratulations.

William Kelii Kekaula

January 17, 2026 at 11:29 AM

My heartfelt thanks.

Janice Canerdy

January 17, 2026 at 7:23 AM

Hilo Poet, what a GREAT haiku! CONGRATS on your win. Janice

William Kelii Kekaula

January 17, 2026 at 8:50 AM

My highest regards for your support.

Paula Goldsmith

January 11, 2026 at 10:16 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a great picture you have here. Wish I was walking on that beach. "Good Luck" Have A Very Blessed Day Writing Away..............

William Kelii Kekaula

January 11, 2026 at 4:46 PM

I appreciate your every word, Aloha.