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1423 10-29-25  Thank you Daniel for your inspiration
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1423

caught in undertows
 depression hunts like a beast ~
  one more empty chair
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Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 5:43 PM
Powerful, Sam ~
Kauffman Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 9:06 PM
Thank you so much, Lin. Your feedback means a lot to me. We are battling a beast named depression. It’s a battle we have to win. So appreciate your support. Blessings.
Kauffman Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 9:03 PM
Thank you so much, Line. Your feedback means a lot to me. We are battling a beast named depression. It’s a battle we have to win. So appreciate your support. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
November 5, 2025 at 4:09 AM
- Back with a congratulation and a hug :) -
Kauffman Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 9:05 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Hugs and blessings!
Poet Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem, dear Sam.
Gifford Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 2:54 AM
Hello Sam, a very touching and heartfelt piece. So sorry about your loss. Sending prayers and positive vibes your way, my poet friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 6:06 AM
Oh no! My nephew went under 4 years ago on Halloween early hours. He was just 28. So sorry for your friend. Truly sorry. Tears. Your poem is most expressive. Fave
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:18 PM
oh wow....the last line (empty chair) I can relate to....lost my brother to depression. The hurt remains.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 6:07 AM
Likewise, Sara, so sorry to hear.
Kauffman Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 12:41 PM
Oh, Sara, I am so very sorry to hear of the loss of your brother! Indeed the hurt without any chance of resolution cuts deep! Thank you for sharing your grief. I guess writing about the subject allows all of us to share our stories as we continue to wrestle with the unanswerable question of "why?" Sending you prayers of consolation and hugs.
Hind Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:17 PM
Sometimes I go through it, but - have to make myself go to that chair. Enjoyed this
Kauffman Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 12:37 PM
Paige, know you remain in my prayers. Your courage in the face of this soul crushing condition is a stirring inspiration! You will always have a chair at my table! Blessings of peace to you.
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 2:51 PM
Depression is one horrible bedfellow. Sad one but so true. Thanks for sharing this one with us. If for the contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Kauffman Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 12:35 PM
Dear Sara, what a wonderful, apt description of depression that smothers one's dreams creating a living nightmare. Thank you for your good wishes. It is for a contest on senryu. Sending you blessings and prayers.
Poet Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Profoundly lamentable, my dear Sam. Your response to Anne-Lise touched me, revealing the muse behind this senryu. Death, an unexpected visitor, knocks unbidden, while the act of suicide weaves a quilt of sorrow, poignant and wrenching.
Kauffman Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Dearest Lasaad, your beautiful feedback so eloquently expresses the profound grief around suicide that never has a resolution for those left behind. A quilt of heart wrenching sorrow indeed. Blessings to you dear friend and gratitude!
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Nicely expressed, Sam
Kauffman Avatar
October 31, 2025 at 12:29 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea! Daniel's poem on suicide sparked this poem. When we lose someone special there is always a hole in our lives and it is especially painful when that person has taken their own life. Blessings of continued healing to you!
Andresen Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 12:42 PM
- Deep and sad, Sam - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Kauffman Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 8:28 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Daniel’s poem was the inspiration for this sentry. It deeply touched me as I have lost a dear friend to suicide. It is tragic. Sending you hugs and blessings.
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