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1420 Two Line Rime Poetry Contest-Couplet Form

Sponsored by: Brian Strand

Date: 15-10-2025

1420

A child's first cry after its birth
repaid after leaving the earth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniels Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 6:30 AM
Excellent two-liner ! Well-done, Patri. ThkU for posting. Blessings.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
October 16, 2025 at 11:39 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
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