13 Roses of 33

When I brush my teeth each night
I think of You,
  while I rinse and spit
and take off my shoes,
I sigh 'Valeriya'
  then breath again,
I look to the moon
  and feel the luckiest of men... 

so tonight -

  I send you 13 sentient 

  symbolic roses
which are to tie
  like a daisy 

chain

'round yr head,....

  yr utmost beauty to be adorned...

whilst I lay alone in bed,

but the most amazing moment
  when dreaming of you till morn, 
is the melting of my heart
  and the ressurection of thorns...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 14, 2010 at 5:56 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Andrew. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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