1-31-10 My Love, My Angel [my Nick]

Finally the night has come and i will lay upon the clouds,
and though they have been warmed by days sun,
they are no warmth compaired to yours,

my eyes will shut softly and i will fall to dreams,
and there are angels feathers around me,
though their softness will never compair to your skin,

the night with darkness masks vision,
so that those who wish may gaze forever,
in both darkness and light i shall gaze into your eyes like starlight,

the dew drops fall upon my lips, 
coolness reminding me of the soon waking dawn,
though when i open my eyes they are your tears,

they fall upon me gently laced with care,
as you gaze down and i am captivated in your soul,
and the feathers which i lay upon are indeed connected to you,

i wipe away the tears from your calm face,
and hush your fears allowing my hand to cup your cheek,
do you feel my heart beating across this small but vast space?

the wind blows the moon into focus,
a glowing halo behind your head,
it only alights your features more,

the gasp that escapes my lips is not brought on by cold air,
though i believe that this space between us is too far,
and now my love come cover me in your warmth...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Moribund Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 12:54 PM
Dear Rain: Glad to hear that love has entered into your life. Great poem expressing this, thank you 4 sharing this with us @ poetry soup. Your friend: Sheol
Beaufort Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 3:25 PM
A lovely piece. Full of passion. It's a pleasure to read about passion that is this pure.
Summers Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 1:00 PM
such a sweet passionet write Rain really good write really good. sad yet soothing you are a morethan good poet really good work on this one
Saucillo Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 11:58 AM
beautifully written. EPIC
Smith Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 6:44 AM
wow rain this is truely intense! not sure what to say but wow =)
Chachere Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 3:03 PM
This is so passionste Rain. And i love your name, it's pretty<: And thank you again for the kind comments. Write some more! -Always Lynette
Brown Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 10:31 AM
What an amazing piece Rain. I am so happy to have been able to read your poetry today. I haven't been able to read much poetry for a few days now. Love, Carol
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