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N/A in "12 Things You'd Teach Your Child Contest,"  Date written: 02/09/2023

 

12 Values a Child Should Learn

                       H o n e s t y,
                  because without it,
  a child turns a blind eye to the truth.
                           H o n o r, 
                   because without it,
  a child compromises his principles.
                        F a i r n e s s, 
                   because without it,
     a child has no concept of justice.
                      T o l e r a n c e,
                   because without it,
        a child grows narrow of mind.
                        P a t i e n c e,
                   because without it,
      a child loses grip on self-control.
                         R e s p e c t, 
                   because without it,
       a child rebels against authority.
                      D i s c i p l i n e, 
                   because without it, 
        a child struggles to persevere.
                 S e l f - r e l i a n c e, 
                  because without it,
 a child becomes slave to dependency.
                        H u m i l i t y,
                  because without it, 
          a child cultivates arrogance.
                         C h a r i t y 
                   because without it,
        a child falls prey to selfishness.
                     C o n f i d e n c e,
                    because without it,
                   a child turns inward.
                              L o v e, 
                    because without it,
    a child cannot practice acceptance.
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 7:29 AM
I enjoyed reading this lovely write. I am Fav this one. Yes, you should teach your child these 12 things/the world would be a better place. Glad Silent One did this. Have a lovely day writing away........................
One Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 12:00 PM
An excellent poem, surprised it did not placed dear Edward.. This wasn't really a contest, but an opportunity to showcase an Na poem..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Excellent, Edward! I love that you added “without it…” what happens, and highlighted the great character traits! Should be a winner! Also love every time I see your Navy photo. God bless you!
Ibeh Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 3:41 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Kim!
Rose  Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 1:53 AM
wow you stunned me into silence Edward. That doesn't happen often. Your list is brilliantly composed. I will share this on my face book page if thats ok by you. A fav for me, xo
Ibeh Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 4:40 AM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, visit and fave, Vienna:-) I give you carte blanche to do so!
Volumes Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 4:09 PM
12 traits every good person should possess. A fine Poem Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 4:19 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy:-)
Sands Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Excellent poem. Valuable.. a Fave for me :)
Ibeh Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 4:18 PM
Thank you very much the feedback and fave, dear Heidi:-)
Pandit Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 5:47 AM
A child that adopts these values will be a successful citizen of the world. Wisdom words my friend. A winning poem you wrote.
Ibeh Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-) I appreciate your lovely feedback.
Poet Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 7:05 PM
Given its skill, this poem is excellent. You created a masterpiece by merging famous metaphors and excellent diction in this great verse. This is a Fave. Good luck with the contest dear Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 7:28 PM
Thank you very much for the visit, wonderful feedback and fave, Lasaad:-) Most obliged.
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