'128 Words' - Spring

SPRING ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Small spring bird sings. Blooms wait, rain pings. The rush to grow. The threat of snow. Spring hides new life, waits for the strife, of snow and frost, it knows the cost. Burnt leaves, ice found, still on the ground. Spring is no fool, bides by each rule. Waits for the sun, still hid no fun. One more month, cold! Might just get bold? But it's learnt well, to cold, to tell new life, come out while cold has clout. Yet still, birds sing, in hope that spring, gets it just right, no need to fight. Warmth of the sun. Cold on the run. Jack frost packs up. Spring has a look. Yep cold has gone, birds in full song. Spring once more rules. The cold, downed tools. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
01/31/18 Entered the '128 words' Poetry Contest sponsored by Silent One
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Barden Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:37 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Mick - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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February 8, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Beautiful imagery flows wonderfully through your poem Mick. Fantastic content in your smooth write as well. Congratulations on your fine win! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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February 9, 2018 at 5:34 AM
Thank you for your kind words Susan, appreciated... best wishes... Mick
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 2:25 AM
I was.. some great poems..I went for flow and rhymes im regards to placements..
Talbot Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 6:42 AM
You did a grand job, thanks, Silent!,
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 7:39 PM
Big congrats on your win, Mick!
Talbot Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 8:15 PM
Thank Andrea, some amazing entries, well honoured I am!
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 6:44 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Mick.
Talbot Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Thank Line, some amazing entries, well honoured I am!
Cunningham Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Great result Mick, well done. Regards Tom.
Talbot Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 5:29 PM
Thank you, Tom, Just love the challenge!
One Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Great imagery and great take on the contest Mick.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Talbot Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 5:22 PM
Thanks Silent, I think you were spoilt for choice, some amazing poetry to chose from!
Payton Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Beautiful, great fluid diction and you started perfect and ended so smooth.
Talbot Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Many thanks, Normie, your kind words appreciated! :-)
Y. Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Hi Mick, You made good use of 128 words. I look forward to the "Spring" season.I was born in the Spring. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Talbot Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Thanks Alexis, fun to do, Silent One comes up with great poetry challenges! If you have entered, good luck to you too... Mick
Cunningham Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Brilliantly done Mick. Good luck. Regards Tom.
Talbot Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 4:31 AM
Again on both counts, thank you, Tom, appreciated ... Mick
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