1-24-10 Fly Upon Broken Wings

Written: 1-24-10



                            Naked sparrow, how you cringe beneath broken wings, 
                                   unable to sleep in your last moments of life, 
             to lay awake and stare upon the stars and moon and sun within the sky, 
                                   little naked sparrow so broken and bleeding, 
                              will you be picked up and carried to the Heavens?

                          Naked sparrow, why do you not scream in all your pain?
                                        you do not cry above to the heavens, 
                      is your faith strong enough that you believe salvation will come?
                        you stare above silent, lying there with broken beating heart, 
                                  blood upon my hands, ill pick you up gently
                                  should i be your angel, come to rescue you?
                             
                           Naked sparrow, oh you are truly beautiful in your death,
                             do you know my tears fall upon your broken body?
            a gasp excaped my tender lips, when i felt your heart beat leave my skin,
                                     the pulse of life no longer remains within,
             fly my little broken sparrow, naked beneath your blood, on broken wings
                                           and find the serenity of paradise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 2, 2010 at 3:17 PM
This is beautiful. You are so good with words. P.D.
Echo Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Very inspirational :) I love your work -Echo
Saucillo Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 11:59 AM
you're such a great writer. such a great inspiration. now i feel like writing. great job Rain!
Von Graves Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 7:42 AM
As always great depth in this work Rain. Please read my new write and leave me a commentthis write is sad and yet has a soothing flow to it great job
Brown Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 5:06 AM
I say from the poetry I am reading this morning it seems it was an inspiring weekend for all. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Rain. Love, Carol
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January 24, 2010 at 4:29 PM
poor little sparrow.This was nicely written.Hope all is well with you.I am still working on another poem but it is taking a bit. Today my goal is to read poems and comment on them and say hi to everyone who helped me in my mess of a life.
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