1-24-10 Angel

Why did God throw you out of Heaven? For surely my love you are an angel, his 
creation. Perfection graces your kiss upon my skin, it is held within your loving eyes. You 
have know pain, it is written in your soul, and you have known love, it is scrawled upon your 
heart, and you have known beauty for i see it myself within your endless eyes. That which I 
could stare into forever like the leages of oceans below the blue skys. Will you lay beneath 
the skys with me angel? Till God again forgives both our souls. My love, just say you will wait 
with me for eternity, and if we are never accepted, then lets create our own bliss...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Trevino Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 12:59 PM
You really are something for a teen . You scare me . Not in a bad way . I am 17 fix'in to be 18. I can not write like this . I love the poem about you . About the bird. It is so cool. I am to into my self to write from the heart. I know my mom tells me I am a bit selfish.
Torbenson Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 10:49 AM
this poem made me want to cry it is beautiful all the way through the poem it touched me good writting keep it up
Chachere Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 8:46 PM
the ending is so beautiful.and haha, i was mad in that poem i wrote. anyway, gorgeous write. -Always Lynette
Bono Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 8:55 AM
very nice.Stopping by to say good morning,hope your day is good.
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