1-23-10 I Feel You On My Skin [r.I.P Jacob Tyler Schmidt ]

i can feel you on my skin
your soothing me, 
your angel wings brushing my shoulder blades,
your wiping my tears away,
soothing my fears away,
i feel your lips, just gently brushing mine, 
i can feel you on my skin
your rubbing my heart,
warming me from the inside,
your my love, more-so then my lover,
i can feel you on my skin
i close my eyes,
and i see you in my mind,
hovering over my shoulders,
your face beside mine,
i can feel you on my skin
your whispering,
please dont leave yet,
my mistake,
i love you, 
please dont go,
i can feel you on my skin
i wipe away my eyes,
wipe away the blood from my flesh,
suprise, suprise,
i cant win,
but at least i can feel you on my skin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 19, 2010 at 2:00 PM
I REALLY DID ENJOY READING YOUR POEM TODAY..THANK YOU FOR READING MINE.... MY GOOD THOUGHT ON A LOVED ONE, STILL LOVING ME EVEN WHEN THEY ARE GONE....BEAUTIFUL....IRMA
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January 24, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Very nice read this afternoon...Marty
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January 24, 2010 at 9:36 AM
A beautiful way to look at the after life and personally it reminded me of my grand father. Lately it feels like I have been set in his ways not long after he died, maybe his spirit watching over me? or may I find strength in his death rather than sorrow. Enjoyed this read and have a great Sunday. :)
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January 23, 2010 at 4:22 PM
thank you for everything.
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