12-18-2018 Monoku

an old movie a reel resurrection winding by
                                             12-18-2018

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Andrea Dietrich

December 21, 2018 at 7:10 PM

You did "reely" great for first one. Loved your word play!!

Silent One

December 21, 2018 at 9:46 AM

Oh, I meant for future poem in my contest.. That must have come across as a bit bossy! Lol.. sorry David.

David Drowley

December 21, 2018 at 11:29 AM

Sorry about the question marks. They were substituted in for a thumbs up emoticon.

David Drowley

December 21, 2018 at 11:28 AM

No problem. Keeping contest integrity is important!?? Keep those contests coming.

Silent One

December 20, 2018 at 12:34 PM

Oh, sorry, now I see it. If you put it on the botton of the one liner please.

David Drowley

December 20, 2018 at 1:20 PM

Silent One, I have placed the date of the poem just below the Monoku. Thank you for requesting the change. David Drowley

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 20, 2018 at 7:18 AM

- A wonderful "one liner" - Congratulations, David :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

December 20, 2018 at 7:00 AM

Hi David, I enjoy the classics. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Silent One

December 20, 2018 at 5:37 AM

This was very good, it would have probably finished first place.. However, you did not follow all the instructions of the contest guidelines, which asked for poems to be dated.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

David Drowley

December 20, 2018 at 9:19 AM

Sorry I misunderstood where the date belonged. It was in the title.