1-16-17 Haiku

Just two humming birds,
Can't make up their little minds
Who gets to eat first.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 8:08 PM
Cute.
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 2:32 PM
Good one. Way to go. They probably will fight it out. LOL..Thanks for sharing ..Sara K
Olaoluwa  Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:41 AM
Quiet funny to read. Awesome feelings of who go first
Sietesantos Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 12:58 AM
Excellent Haiku! Clever and enjoyable to read! Pandita
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